Arthur is retired. He has time, a booth at the back of a Duluth diner, and a notebook. He is not doing anything with this information. He is just writing it down.
Over two winters, Arthur watches three people: a server whose competence the diner cannot afford to recognize without promoting her into a position that would break her; a young man who has studied the rules carefully and believes that following them correctly will produce the promised outcome; and a shift manager who distributes small acknowledgments and small punishments with genuine consistency, and who genuinely believes this is the same as being fair.
None of them are villains. None of them are heroes. The system does not require either.
Arthur’s Working Notes is a novella in the tradition of Orwell’s Animal Farm: fiction as structural argument. The institution under examination is a Midwestern diner, which is to say it is every institution. The argument is about what happens when ordinary people move through systems none of them designed, what understanding costs, and the distance between knowing how something works and being able to change it.
Arthur keeps filling the notebook. Nothing changes and everything does.
Published by CtrlAltDelusion Press. ~19,000 words. Available in paperback and ebook.